Having reviewed the excerpt and the review, this detective sez: I've change my plea to guilty. Okay, see what happens when you reach too far for a reference? Morrissey, MTX, cleverness, etc.
Anyway, it sounds good, but this could be a red flag: "Throughout the book I frequently found myself online, looking up references and books and vocabulary words."
Although this might be promising: epigraph (a-PIG-rape): an obscure quotation at the beginning of a book designed to make the author of the book seem smarter and more well-read than its readers. An epigraph that doesn't make the reader feel confused, small, worthless, and stupid is an epigraph that has failed. Therefore, the best epigraphs have no discernible relationship to the contents of the books they adorn."
But is it Frank's own commentary on his work, or simple reflection on what he consciously avoided while writing his novel, allegedly for "young adults"? Damn the postmodern quandry and the internet speculation and the punk detective's work is never done and no rest for the wicked. Ly speculative that is! Score!